Monday, December 12, 2011

Winter From My Window

Looking out my winter window, I see little mounds of snow behind the tracks of the long, lanky feet of the black rabbit with a fluffy tail-poof like a black cotton ball.  I hear the sound of snow crunching under the peaceful deer.  I see a pine cone falling from a pine tree like a dive-bombing paper airplane I once built.  I also see beautiful snowflakes falling down past the towering mountains that look dark and gloomy under the shadowy, depressing clouds.  I look around, realizing the doe is almost gone.  Then I finally go to get some hot chocolate.

Brandon Bieske
Age 8




7 comments:

Dean said...

I'm with Brandon!

Pamela Spitzer said...

Way to go, Brandon. Nice job! :-)

Roksana Podgorska said...

seriously? he wrote that?
WOW!

Nat said...

Wow! You have a very talented young writer there :-)

Gutkowskiret said...

Brandon just showed us that you are never to young to enjoy the beauty that God created! great job Brandon Love you

Mrs. Tuna said...

Very poetic. I lucky to crank out a limerick.

The Accidental Somebody said...

He sure did! Even his sister was impressed which is saying A LOT.