Looking out my winter window, I see little mounds of snow behind the tracks of the long, lanky feet of the black rabbit with a fluffy tail-poof like a black cotton ball. I hear the sound of snow crunching under the peaceful deer. I see a pine cone falling from a pine tree like a dive-bombing paper airplane I once built. I also see beautiful snowflakes falling down past the towering mountains that look dark and gloomy under the shadowy, depressing clouds. I look around, realizing the doe is almost gone. Then I finally go to get some hot chocolate.
Brandon Bieske
Age 8
7 comments:
I'm with Brandon!
Way to go, Brandon. Nice job! :-)
seriously? he wrote that?
WOW!
Wow! You have a very talented young writer there :-)
Brandon just showed us that you are never to young to enjoy the beauty that God created! great job Brandon Love you
Very poetic. I lucky to crank out a limerick.
He sure did! Even his sister was impressed which is saying A LOT.
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